The Tubing Disaster

BOOM! My tube hit a wave! My brother and I were getting soaked I screamed, “AHHHHHH!” That’s when I saw it, a jellyfish coming right towards us.

My brother said, “No big deal! Jellyfish are everywhere!” But this one was HUGE! When it was right next to us, it swam away. “Phew!” I was relieved. All of a sudden, BOOM! We hit another wave. I almost fell off. We were screaming and yelling. I saw my parents waiting at the dock. We were going to have to get off soon. I was going to jump. “Okay! Three, two, and one. AHHHHHH!” I screamed. I made a big splash! I swam all the way to the dock and went up the ladder.

“We almost fell off!” I told my parents as I climbed up the ladder so fast I was out of breath.

“It was so much fun!” my brother screamed with excitement.

“Yeah,”  said my brother’s friend, Joey slapped me on the back.

“I told you that you would love it,” my dad smiled from ear to ear.

2 thoughts on “The Tubing Disaster

  1. This story is AMAZING! I can not believe how well written this is. I love the dialogue, the detail, and especially love the last line: “my dad smiled from ear to ear”. I liked this line because it really made me picture your father with a big smile on his face, and made me smile too! Plus, it was such a nice detail that helped any reader picture how happy your dad and I were when you had a great time on the tube. You captured my attention the whole time! from, Tara Kantor

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