I am now an expert book writer! I wrote about Bar Mizvahs. It took me two whole months to finish in all my lessons. I have learned how to use expert words, pros and cons, similarities and differences and so much more. I have also learned to put in facts but not too many. I chose this topic because when my brother turned 13 I started getting interested in it. Week by week I wrote edited and revised. My favorite part about writing an expert book was learning that I can write well. It was hard but worth it to make an expert book amazing.
Excellent job! I learned some new things about Bar Mitzvahs and string ceremonies in India. Love, Mr. Lubin. I also liked the design and the pictures that you chose!
I really liked your book! I had never heard of a string ceremony and now I know all about it!! Thanks.
——–Mr. Waldman
Great job! I loved learning about the string ceremony and reading about the pros and cons of having a bar mitzvah!
Great job, Sasha! Fascinating! I had no idea that there was such a thing as a string ceremony. Very interesting. You put a lot of hard work into this book.
Thank you!
Amy Schwartz (Win’s Mom)
Sasha,
Thank you for teaching me about something new. I enjoyed reading your book!
Keep writing,
Mrs. Greco