Spring Poem

It’s time the sun comes

It’s time the bees come

It’s time the flowers bloom

It’s time to go on the trampoline

It’s time to not were a jacket

and it’s time not to get a cold

It’s time for Spring

having picnics every week

but our water still might leek

but we can still play hid and seek

jump jump jumping all day

I think this is the season when we play

birds come on!

butterflies come on!

fly!

It’s Spring time!

It’s time the sun comes

The Worst Restaurant I have ever been to.

Have you ever thought if there was a restaurant  that was so bad that babies could make better food than the own restaurant ? Well I have been to one of thoes kind of restaurant. Starting in Cape Cod with my whole entire family and the waitress comes over with a glass of water, but the glass had lipstick on it! So we were all grossed out by the glasses. After the gross moment the waitress came over to take our order so we told her what we wanted. After a while our waitress came over and was holding all of our food. When I took my fist bite of my order it tasted disgusting, and every one in my family thought so to. Later we all were like “this is the worst restaurant we have ever been to”!

Plant Post #3

After our plants grew flowers the next step was to pollinate. To pollinate we had to either use  Q – tips or our fingers. To pollinate we had to put our finger or Q -tip inside the flower and tap it very gently. After we pollinated the difference was the flower started to die but then we realized that seed pods were coming out.

On our manipulated cell one was dead  and cell four was dead but cell three had 10 leaves, 5 buds, and was 8cm tall. The  reason of this was because there was less soil in the quad.

I think next the seed pods will get bigger because if it grows it will get bigger.    

maglev post #1

A maglev train is not any old kind of train it is a train that doesn’t have wheels but has magnets that repel from the track to the bottom of the train. My groups idea was to have half disc magnets and half strip magnets but we didn’t succeed.

 

What succeeded was when we did stirp magnets and disc magnets on the bottom of the train. What failed was that we couldn’t make the train move across the track with a slight push.

 

What was challenging was to figure out how the magnets can repel. What worked well was when we got the train to levitate.  

This is my groups first idea for our maglev train.

My Expert Book – Bar Mitzvahs

I am now an expert book writer!  I wrote about Bar Mizvahs. It took me two whole months to finish in all my lessons. I have learned how to use expert words,  pros and cons, similarities and differences and so much more. I have also learned to put in facts but not too many. I chose this topic because when my brother turned 13 I started getting interested in it. Week by week I wrote edited and revised. My favorite part about writing an expert book was learning that I can write well. It was hard but worth it to make an expert book amazing.

Reflection on Persuasive Writing Experience

I wrote about how everyone should keep the Scarsdale pool clean. I have learned to really speak to my audience and be clear and look up at the camera sometimes. I have also learned not to be wishy washy and also to use a persuasive voice. As well I have learned how to use pop out words like you may think or believe me. I have also learned to use details and evidence. The most convincing words I used were you may think and we could use.

While watching my persuasive speech I realized I could of had more emotion, and I also realized I could be a little more serious. I also could look up at the camera more. Also, I could of added more action words to my speech. To convince my audience more I also could of described the pool more. So that’s what I learned to write a persuasive essay.