It is time to pick a main inquiry question. At first I thought it would be hard to think of a question but it turned out to be easyer then I thought. There was alot of editing and revising going on and then I finnaly finished and decided what my question was going to be, it is, Smart Home Voice-Activated Assistants Like Alexa or Google Assistant: Friend or Foe. We had to make sure that we liked the topic and the question before we do the actual thing. For our project we came up with sub question to help us answer the main question. I finished that which means now we reaserch for our main project. Its going to be a long way but im exited for it.
I like your first sentence because you jumped right into your main idea. I also like how you told your process of choosing a main inquiry question. Your ending is also great because it leaves a question in the reader’s head. Just try to watch for the spelling mistakes, but other than that, great job!
I like how you wrote about a little bit of your process but mostly your feelings twords it.