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Poem

I Wish

I wish I can see him again.

I wish he would come back just for me.

I wish I could tell him what it’s like without him.

I wish so hard but it won’t come true.

-Carson

Blog Reflection:

I wrote this poem about my best friend who moved away. His name was Adam. Even though I did not mention his name this poem was for him. One reason why I did not mention his name is because some people do not know him. Another reason is because it was not just meant for him but it was meant for anyone who knew someone close to them that has moved away. My lesson of my poem that I am trying to get across is that you should be nice to the people  you like because they might not always be there for you.

I Remember

By Carson Cohen

I Remember

My First time playing soccer.

I Remember

Cutting my foot open.

I Remember

My first day at school.

I Remember

writing this poem.

I Remember

the stories my dad tells me.

I Remember

the bad sub I had in Hebrew School.

I Remember

My first year at camp.

I Remember

getting lost at Disney World.

I Remember good and bad things.

Blog Post:

I did not rhyme my poem because I thought it weird if I forced it to rhyme. I tried to have different time in my life by changing how old I was. For Example, I had a bad sub in hebrew school recently, but My first time playing soccer was about seven year ago. My favorite line in the poem is probably the last line “I Remember Good And Bad Tings.” That is my favorite line because it shows that everything in life will not all ways go the way you want it too and that you will still remember bad things.

Strangers

There they stood

Copying me

Having a staring contest

We ran

But they followed.

We jumped up and down

So did they.

They called me copycats but

So did I.

They left when I left.

Mainly because the mirror fell.

Blog Reflection:

In my poem Strangers. I am talking about me in a mirror. I try not to tell the audience that it is a mirror not a random stranger copying every move I do. I wait till the last line to tell them that it is a mirror. I also give the audience a hint withthe picture of a cartoon character standing in front of a mirror. I thought of the idea of writing about this topic for my poem because of I was once reading a poem about real people who copied each other. After I read that poem a lightbulb hung over my head.

I Don’t Like

I Don’t Like Bad Reffs

I Don’t Like gum

I Don’t Like candy

I Don’t Like Soda

I Don’t Like Yoda

I Don’t Like Black and blues

Blog Refletion

In my poem I made it rhyme. i did not foce it to rhyme though. I hope you enjoy!

Building my Rube Goldberg.

Is it better for me to work alone or with a partner?

If I were to change something:

I really enjoyed this project because I was able to create my own design instead of someone telling us the topic and the design. I would like to do this project again.

What did I have In my Rube Goldberg?

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