In Philadelphia we went around Philadelphia and saw all kinds of cool things for example we saw the liberty bell witch was really fun.We also went to some places witch was fun we learned a lot of fun and nice facts in the past.Philadelphia was a fun experience for me.
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I like how you said that places in Philly were really cool, on the other hand you should say more places we visited and explain them in more detail.
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