I wrote about Roblox because I play it every day. I took pictures from my i Pad and sent it to my drive. I tried to look for books about Roblox but I could not find any. I put in a few text structures for example pros and cons, compare and contrast, text features, subtitles and glossary. I also learned that you could put in a mini story. My mini story is about Wizard Tycoon. I had to talk like an expert or I would not be writing about Roblox. Also instead of just writing facts you could add some ideas. I also used I but then Mrs. Degrazia told me to change it. I learned to connect my chapters to have a logical sequence. Also your pictures need to match your words. Remember this is an expert book you will learn something. Hope your walking away thinking about something on Roblox.
Charles, I am so proud of your expert book and how hard you worked on it! Maybe when we get home, you can download Roblox to my iphone – I can’t wait to play it after reading your expert book!
Love,
Mommy
great story, now I know so much more about Roblox and its good and bad parts! -Lisa
I liked the pictures and you did a great job describing Roblox. Mr. Lubin
Great job, Charles! This book demonstrates a lot of hard work and enthusiasm for Roblox. I’m glad that you enjoy it so much 🙂
Amy Schwartz (Win’s Mom)
Great essay! I really enjoyed reading about Roblux and the different games you can play on the app.
Brooke Fina (brandon’s mom)
Interesting article about Robox! Make me want to buy one to play! Thank you for an informative article about this game! -Ms. Huang