Remember the sand bar in Miami with the jellyfish I told you about? Well now I am talking about that in this post.
When I first walked to the sand bar I really liked it, because I thought it was so cool, but then I saw a jellyfish and it practically scared me to death, I started screaming my head off and ran back to shore, people were staring at me the whole way to the shore, Because I screamed the whole way to shore because I thought the jellyfish was chasing me.
My dad told me that jellyfish float and don’t move anywhere, so I shouldn’t be scared of them, but I probably always will be.
Dhoni,
I love that you decided to post about your vacation and go into detail about your experience at the sand bar. I’ve never been to one so it was nice to hear your perspective on it. Truthfully, as I read your post, I couldn’t help but chuckle. You did a great job explaining in detail what happened to you. I was able to see it in my mind. I thought it was a little funny to hear that you thought the jellyfish was chasing you. You are so funny and have such a bubbly personality, and it was definitely apparent in your post. Stay true to yourself and keep posting. I look forward to reading more of your posts. Keep up the great work. A suggestion would be to make sure you always re-read your work before you post.
Much love,
Ms. Vega
Dhoni,
I love that you are able to admit this because it is a very funny story. It made me happy just to read it. The way you wrote it really described your experience and your fright. I truly love your writing.
Your Friend,
Hannah
Dear Dhoni,
I liked your story because you really explained how you don’t like jellyfish. It was funny when you ran all the way to shore screaming. Im also scared at jellyfish because they sting you. What is your favorite animal and why?
Sincerely,
Milo