Mary’s story: My go cart is awesome

My go cart is Awesome!, by Mary

Hi! This is a post about Mary’s story. Mary loved writing this because she felt happy writing it. The reason Mary wrote about her go cart was because she wanted to show everyone how much she loved her go cart, because she loved the flag, and because it is from Santa. Mary wrote that she and her sister share it and she plays with it outside, and that her go cart is fun and she loves her toys. Mary’s favorite part is when she wrote  about her and her sister sharing it. The artwork in Mary’s story is so good because you can really tell what they are,  I could tell right away what her drawings are, and I love them. The thing that surprised me most was that she made sure her words were perfect by adding blue tape. Mary is one the best writers I know.

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  1. Hi it’s Jane. Great article Dhoni! Mary seems like a great artist. I love how you said “The thing that surprised me most was that she made sure her words were perfect by adding blue tape. ” I find that very interesting. What is Mary’s favorite thing to draw? Next time as a suggestion you should include it. Overall you did a great job Dhoni. Can’t wait to see your next blog posts! Bye!

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