It’s too Late now

This a recently published personal narrative I would like to share.

Everything was going smoothly, there was a small breeze on the river.  My brother Benjamin, my mom, a kayaking instructor, and I were having a nice day on the Colorado river kayaking. The instructor was leading the three of us, followed by me, then Benjamin my brother, and last my mother. There were a series of rocks up ahead of us sticking up out of the water; towering over us.

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One thought on “It’s too Late now

  1. Hey Jojo,
    I really in enjoyed this paragraph from your personal narrative. It is cliff hanger because everything is going so good and then you talked about the big rocks. I pressed ‘click here to read on,’ and the rest of the story was very good. Bye!
    -Dhoni

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