Today we added an eight ft tube at the start that drops a ball into a funnel that falls into the marble run. So now we have at least 7 steps, but I still want too add more to it because we have so much more time. Ben Y agreed with me and said that we should add more. I wanted to have a coat hanger kind of zipline on some string, which could knock the marble into the tube. We still have about 2 weeks left finish, so I hope we’re going to add more.
Rube Goldberg Meet Up #2
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I liked how you included your opinion, instead of just telling what happened.
I like how you told us that there were 2 weeks left of the project because you told us how time was left.
I liked how you added that even though you were conceivably done, you still wanted to add more. If you didn’t write that, your reader would be confused.