My persuasive essay was about global warming.You have to persuade your audience well so they think what you think. You have to use words that will persuade your audience to help. A persuasive essay is a change you make in the world or in your community. A thesis is a bold beginning that will help audience think what you think. I learned not to use words like maybe and this could happen.

I feel good that my essay is out  to the world to see what I think and change the world. And if it does change because of me I will  feel even better than I do now. I usually don’t like being on stage, but this was fun so I was fine with it. I was really nervous, but my friend Leo helped calm me down which did work and I felt better about being on stage. When I finished everyone clapped and I felt good.