I think that Martin Luther King, Jr.’s “I Have a Dream” speech was a very big help for black people’s rights to do whatever they want just like white people used to.
He was one of the reasons that all black people could have their rights because “All men are created equally”. The government was being unfair towards black people, for example when Rosa Parks did not give her seat to a white man on the bus she got arrested.
In conclusion he was a very good inspiration for the government to stop being unfair towards black people by telling one of the most famous speech in the U.S.A.
You should add more like how blacks were treated then and now. The quote in the second paragraph when it says “All men are created equally” It should be “All men are treated equally”.
I think your paragraphs explain your claim very well. But you didn’t talk about his speech other than the main sentence.
I thought that your post was good. I had a good understanding of what you thought about the speech.
I like how you gave evidence to support that he changed black people’s rights, but you should add more of it. You should add more opinions.
Even though yours was very short you explained a lot of things and you gave a good example.