For our big project capstone we had to chose a topic. At first I wanted to do something on football then Mrs. Edwards told me that I could do how someone affected the game. Then I thought basketball because I know a player who affected the game so then I knew what my topic was all thanks to Mrs. Edwards. But then I thought everything I do is about sports so I wanted to mix it up so I picked robots. I am really interested in robots and fascinated how they work that is why I picked my topic.
You should read it over because you have some spelling mistakes. You should make it more detailed. I like the part where you talk about To mix it up.
I like how you explain the process but the blog is really unorganized. I think you should of put more effort into it.
I like this blog post but you say “then” like 3 times maybe change the word but overall it was good.
I liked how you explained your ideas. Maybe you could add more details though.
I like reading about the topics you considered and why you finally decided to research “robots.”