I am reading Touch blue by Cynthia Lord. I am reading this book with Meera. As we are reading we are jotting about what we notice. This is one of my jots:
Aaron jumped into the bushes when some one coming to him.
I noticed this on page 18. it stood out to me because Aaron jumped into the bushes when only one person was coming and he did not know who it was. Aaron could of meet the person but instead he jumped into the bushes.