November
15
Philadelphia Trip
I think the Phily trip was really cool because we got to see a lot of famous things and learn a lot the guides were really nice and the show was amazing. The buses were really nice. the museum had a lot of interesting things my favorite was independence hall were we got to see all the artifacts that are famous like the rising sun chair.
I like that you said every thing you liked about the Philadelphia trip.
I think you should add some more about what you did because the reader can’t really understand what’s happening. I like how you talked about what cool things you saw. Nice writing!