My Personal Narrative

The Zipline
Montgomery Lamb
I looked down like I had so many times before. I must have been hundreds of feet from the ground where I wished I was standing. I couldn’t move. I couldn’t blink. Then I thought, “What did I get myself into?” I gripped the rope tighter and prayed for a miracle.
This was going to be my first time going off the zip line. When I woke up, little did I know that I would be face to face with one of my greatest fears.
My friends were cheering for me; they smiled at me. I smiled back, not just any smile, a fake, I’m scared to death smile.
I was staring down at the ground again. I was thinking about all those times I had done something new. I would do it, like it, and go on it again. Then I remembered the times I did not go on a ride. For example, when I did not go on the roller coaster, because I was too terrified. Or, the time when I did not go down the water slide, because I was too frightened. At that moment, I thought about when I would get home that day, after the activities I did not do, and I would be disappointed. I scooched forward a little bit, gripped the rope tighter and let go.
I couldn’t see. Everything was green, all the trees, and so was the grass. I was going like a time machine. The whole scene was a blur. I kept zipping and zipping until finally the zip line came to a stop.
I looked around, and tried to stop my dizziness. Then people started running to me. I saw they were all going to help me down the ladder. Well, I didn’t need help.
I tried to unhook the harness as fast as I could. Great, another person ran to where the beginning of the zip line was. I quickly put my foot on the ladder, I did not want anyone besides me on it.
I did I one step at a time although I was trying to do three. I got down and started to run, run as fast as my little legs could carry me, to where the zip line began.

One thought on “My Personal Narrative

  1. Dear Mojo: This is great. I have been on a zip line like this, and I was freaking out, but this sounds scarier. I loved all your actions, your flashbacks, and flash forwards. When you say in the text, ” My friends were cheering for me; they smiled at me. I smiled back, not just a smile, a fake, I’m scared to death smile.” that sentence you showed how scared you were and that part also made me fell like I was in your shoes. Your zip line experience sounded scary but amazing.
    Kate

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