The Best Time Of Our Life

Here is an exert from my narrative that I recently wrote:

As I was thinking about my plan,  I heard the motorboat again. “Oh, no, it’s back again,” I thought.  As I started to slow down, the boat turned and the driver stared at me. Then I started to paddle as fast as I could because I did not want to experience another boat.  When I reached the sand and saw all my friends, I was so glad to see them. Most of them did not even know what I did. But they would figure it out.  When I saw Umi, she was smiling. I knew she was up to something.

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1 Comment on The Best Time Of Our Life

  1. jlebale25
    December 7, 2017 at 6:58 pm (2 months ago)

    The story was amazing! It had tons of detail and it is longer than any narrative I have ever wrote. I like that there was an ending where it was kind of a surprise.
    Is the Magic Carpet a kayak training tool?
    From Jo

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