Milo,
I liked how you ended your poem with “When the bee hive attacks” I liked it because it was a strong ending and didn’t really relate to the rest of the poem. I think the line were you wrote ‘ The ones you love the ones you divide” was a very strong line of your poem.
Antara
Milo,
I liked how you ended your poem with “When the bee hive attacks” I liked it because it was a strong ending and didn’t really relate to the rest of the poem. I think the line were you wrote ‘ The ones you love the ones you divide” was a very strong line of your poem.
Antara