My persuasive speech was everyone should see the Radio City Rockettes. I learned how to talk to my audience, to write problems and solutions, convince my audience, and gather evidence and learn how to categorize and organize. I learned to talk to my audience, and  that made me feel that people would get persuaded even more. It really helped my speech to be stronger and more persuading.

After watching the video I thought it was really good and is strong in words and reasons. I know it persuaded my audience. To make my audience more persuaded I should have added some hand motions to really make my audience more persuaded, looked at the camera, stopped mumbling, speaking louder, having a happy expression and have as happy tone with a smile on my face.

https://youtu.be/gj3cDmCQ9Xk