I learned that to make a persuasive essay you need to use strong words such as you should, I believe and more strong words like that. I also learned that you can’t be wishy washy.  Wishy washy is like using words like you could, maybe, and I think. I also learned to use examples and good punctuation.During this unit I also learned how to paragraph.I learned how to persuade people to do what I think.

After watching my video I felt like I could of looked up at the camera more, spoken louder. I think I persuaded my audience because I used strong words.And I did not use words like you could and maybe and I think.I also should of spoken more confident so it would persuade them more.