I think Sae Young really likes to work with others, I don’t think she likes to work alone. I think she gets bored and I think she also should not get scared when other people come when only one person hurts her. I also think she should be more social and try to make new friends and learn proper english. I really like how she is very fragile like a child. She gets deeply affected by one small act and becomes not afraid after something makes her joyful. She should also go look far another husband, he may help with her business and might help with the garden. The husband could also help her get over her sorrows and help her rejoice after something bad happens. I also wonder why Sae Young came to America, and Cleveland in America. I think Cleveland by that time might have a bad reputation. Why doesn’t she want to stay in New York City? It might help with business and not as much crime.
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This is very good. The only thing is that in the middle of the chapter, she did not even go out of the house!
how is she born when she was so scared see did not leave the house and it does not say she is lonely
Himmat, I do not understand your comment