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  1. loreilly29
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    Good job!I probably can tell you struggled on telling the story bit by bit, right? Well, you did good on that!I really like the action words and things like that. The only thing is, i’m wondering how is this Tai Kwan Do?It seems like Martial Arts. Excluding that, good job, Shane!Keep it up. 🙂

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  2. nblachman29
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    Wow Shane it seems like you are very good at Tae Kwon Do! I really liked it! I liked it because it reminds me of my brother Alex! He used to do Tae
    Kwon Do too! ( but he was not as good as you! )

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  3. egordon29
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    Shane your story was awesome!
    I love your dialogue. Here’s my favorite part. “I should do a back kick” That hit a home run! It seems like you like tae kwon doe!

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