The Journey Of Moving To America Writing and Reflection

This is my reflection of my narrative. I used a couple strategies in my narrative but this one stood out. I like show not tell. This is when you take a simple word and extend it. This helped me take short simple words and turn them into sentences. It helped my process by giving me hope that I can write a long story. I still want to improve my writing in internal thinking. I think I can make it more detailed and expressive. Internal thinking also shows emotion and what you think. I think my story could have been more internal thinking. I am really proud of the way I put actions after my dialogue. I think it helped my story by showing what I was doing while I talked. It adds interest and details.