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My parents and my babysitter really helped. They showed my that I should use toilet paper rolls, and I did. The toilet paper rolls helped, so I couldn’t have done it without them.
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My parents and my babysitter really helped. They showed my that I should use toilet paper rolls, and I did. The toilet paper rolls helped, so I couldn’t have done it without them.
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Great reflections! Your Rube Goldberg machine was really cool! Overall, fantastic job Ty!
For your Rube Goldberg I think you did very well with keeping your bog up to date. You also need to revise your reflections, little mistakes like capitals or puntuation really matter. Other wise you did very well overall
I liked how you explained how your baby sitter helped but you could have had how you used the toilet paper.