This is another poem that I wrote, please give me feedback.

With dream of butterflies

And a long loved passion

For forgetting what has happened

Dreams have taken me through the years

Of leaving the world behind

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  1. Hey Zane,
    I really enjoyed your poem. I liked how you showed us the picture. I would have never thought about the picture with dreams, I would have done (if I did a poem about this), it about a boy and butterflies. How did you think about dreams anyways? Bye!

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