This is another poem that I wrote, please give me feedback.
With dream of butterflies
And a long loved passion
For forgetting what has happened
Dreams have taken me through the years
Of leaving the world behind
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Hey Zane,
I really enjoyed your poem. I liked how you showed us the picture. I would have never thought about the picture with dreams, I would have done (if I did a poem about this), it about a boy and butterflies. How did you think about dreams anyways? Bye!
-Dhoni
Hey Zane,
I really enjoyed your poem. I liked how you showed us the picture. I would have never thought about the picture with dreams, I would have done (if I did a poem about this), it about a boy and butterflies. How did you think about dreams anyways? Bye!
-Dhoni