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Answering my main inquiry essay

Finally! I am almost done with my capstone project! All that is left to do is present to my family. I worked really hard to make my presentation the very best it can be. I know it sounds cringy,  but hear me out, when you have worked on a presentation for so long you become proud and a little bit attached to it. I can not believe that 2 months ago I was just deciding on my topic! I bet you want to see it! so, here it is, but In my final script I changed a few things:

 

Who and how are the women treated? Well, women are treated like this all the time, weather it is by a man in the same position, or higher up. STEM jobs have been reported to have many unique experiences. One is feeling like they are not capable. Most earn even less then men with the same gob. This information is found by the pew research center. A study by them shows, STEM work environment is different. It can be more aggressive towards women then men. Another study says, In computer jobs specifically, about ¾ of them say that they have experienced discrimination. Usually related to gender. Some problems have been going on for decades. Women have said  they feel like they are not included. Especially when compared to the men. Women also say they do not get a lot of respect. They also have to more and harder to make any accomplishment. Lots of studies by different people have said that women get paid less than women. Men are more likely to hold higher up positions, as well as, gat what they want all the time. For women that is much harder.

Gender equality is still a big problem for the U.N. There was an advancement, so now women will have equal access to work. It is mostly men that treat women badly.  Partly because they feel more domonant. Awhile ago, women were told to keep quiet and do house chores. They were also expected to have husbands.

 I interviewed Christine Queally, a medical scientist. She told me about her last job before the secure one she has now. She said kin her last job there was a club. You had to be in the club to be listened to, or even respected. If you were not, your ideas were not often used and you barely got to say anything. She was very happy to move jobs.

 

What obstacles did schools and education present? Rosalind Franklin is well known scientist around the world. When Rosalind was in collage, she did not count as a full student. No woman did. A lot of times women did nt even go to school. They stayed home while their husbands were at school or work. Schools would often not let women/girls go to their school. If they did, the living quarters were really bad. The men’s were not only nicer, but larger than the women’s. The only reason that the men payed attention was because they wanted to see if they would make good wives.

Young girls have less women in STEM to look up to. A lot of science is math. Teachers , who are mostly women, a lot of time have math anxiety and they pass it on to girls. They think girls have to work harder to get to the same place as boys.

 

How did women deal with and respond to this way of being treated? When Marie Curie was in france with her husband, they knew that no one would care for her findings. So they worked in the basement of their house. When Marie’s daughter, Irene was born, Marie started working at the Ecole Normale Superieure to support her family. After they moved their lab to a shed. Marie came up with all of her ideas on her own, and never gave up. In WW 1, she opened mobile radiology units to study the effects radiation had on tumors. She is one of the pioneers of women in science.

 

Did women band together? Women started to band together when a law in Colonial America passed, saying that women could not keep money, or own property. They worked together to make their own clubs. In 1869 women shoe workers  built their own union together.

Some women , like Marie Curie worked with their spouses or other family members . A lot of women scientists have role models. Rosalind franklin’s Aunt Alice was a leader in the British Suffrage movement. Her Aunt Mamie, was known for driving her own car around town. At the time women were supposed to be like dolls, very controlled. So, driving was a big no-no. 

 

What are the statistics of women in science today? Women are definitely underrepresented in STEM. even though they make up 47% of total workforce. Even construction companies have more women employed than STEM jobs. There are only 29% women in stem labor, 19% on stem company boards and only 3% CEos In STEm. Half of all biologists are women. STEM Board positions rose 18% in 2020. Women’s applications for science colleges increase 2% yearly. according to the global average girls get better scores in science than boys.  Women only make up 5% of all mathematic and statistics college students, Globally! Christine Also said that, Men make more money.

 

Over all, I think that women are under represented in STEM, but so many are trying to change that. I talked about, who and how women are treated, what obstacles did education and school present, how women deal with this way of being treated, did women band together and the statistics of women in STEM today. Women and girls are good at STEM.

 

Capstone Interview

Hello again! In class we have been hard at work, working on capstone. We have been finding experts to interview. Then we emailed them to sort out the time and where we would have the interview. I think this part of the research is beneficial for some, like me, but it can provide very little information for others. I was also really excited to interview someone.

The first thing I did was go home to ask my mom and Dad if they knew anybody who was a scientist. Even though my Mom said she knew someone, I still went to Google to search for women in science today. Many people who showed up in the Google search were either in a different country or were not alive anymore. 

So I asked my Mom, “ Who do you know that is a woman in science?”  

She told me that her family friend who she knew all her life (and I knew all my life), Christine was a medical scientist. I had totally forgotten that she was a scientist, it was perfect!

Now that I had my interview I needed questions to ask her. I started by brainstorming questions in any order. Then I asked my teacher, Mrs. Cooper, to look over them, and see if there were any corrections. She gave comments on the dock and I corrected and edited the questions. I think for me, it was pretty easy finding a person to interview overall.

Conducting the interview was fairly easy. Christine is super nice and the interview was less than twenty minutes. She gave me understandable answers that I could get the gist of. We talked about the questions and I found that there was no reason to be nervous. I got a lot of good information, like what happened to her company specifically, and what it was like. I think the information I got will be really useful when I  start my final project.

In conclusion, I think my interview went really well! Also do not be afraid, lots of people will be kind to you during the interview and the process to get there.

 

Capstone #1

In my district at the end of 5th grade, the students make a final project, called Capstone. Every student can choose a topic to research. I am really excited about capstone! I love researching new things, and Capstone is a great way to do that.

The process of coming up with a topic was not easy. I was stuck between two options, The struggles of women in science and Fashion trends and why they changed? I ended up choosing The struggles of women in science. I chose it because I thought I could find more research on it and it sounded intriguing.

After I came up with my topic it was time to come up with a main inquiry question, which is a question I will focus on. At first, I was thinking of doing, How were women in science impacted by the way they were treated when they were young and when they became a scientist? But I spoke with Mrs. Cooper  (my teacher) and we agreed to make some changes to the question. My final question is, What obstacles did women in the field of science face and how did it impact their careers?

The sub-questions were easy after I had my main question down. I had already made sub-questions with my old question. But I changed only a few. For example, I changed who treated the women badly? To, How did schools/education present obstacles? I found a grove and slowly came up with more ways to edit.

In Conclusion, I am really excited to start and keep researching!

 

 

Immigration Blog Post # 2

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

In class, we had to interview an immigrant. You could choose a family member or friend. I chose my family friend, called Federico. We interviewed them and then put together a video. This is a little bit about mine.

I found using Adobe really easy. I did not have a lot of options, so it was less overwhelming. The voice-over was stressful because I had to record each picture individually. Also, the voice-over can not be longer than 11 seconds. When writing the script, I got it done really quick since I had really detailed answers. The most challenging thing was redoing my video after it got deleted. I had to start over from scratch. It got stressful because I had to restart everything. Also, some things did not come up the second time I did the video.

I learned that there is no reason to be nervous when you are going to do an interview. Usually, the person you are interviewing is really nice. Conducting an interview is a lot easier than you might think. Especially if you are confident, flexible and a good listener. I also learned that people from the 1960s and on did not go to Ellis Island because it closed.

In conclusion, I think doing this project was really important. We need to learn from real-life experiences, not just stories. 

Click for the Immigration video

 

Immigration Project Post #1

In school, my class and I are doing a unit on immigration. For our final project, we had to interview an immigrant of our choice. We will put together a presentation to share with our classmates. I interviewed a family friend, Fede (Federico is his full name).

The process began with, finding questions to ask. Mrs. Cooper shared a document with some suggestions on what the questions should be like. I wrote 20 down in a doc of my own. I edited my questions so that they sounded more grown-up. I looked to my Mom and brother a lot for help. I rehearsed the questions and practiced using the recording app on my phone. Then I was ready.

I was really nervous when I met up (In-person) with the person that I was interviewing. But I soon realized I had nothing to worry about. We started looking at old photos and chose a few. Just like I had practiced I propped up my phone and started to ask questions. I did my interview a month before it was do. So I had my final answers done early. I liked doing the interview because I got to know my friend better. One thing I would have liked is to take a picture of what Fede looks like now.

In conclusion, I think that learning to interview someone is important. I also thought it was fun.

Rube Goldberg post #2

In this post, I will be sharing everything about my Rube Goldberg, including changes to my final sketch, building, testing, making the final video, and silly things that happened along the way. 

It started on a day in late January when Mrs.Cooper showed us videos about cool and complex machines, that led to simple tasks. I immediately thought of books. I love to read and always carry a book with me. Close a book, easy. That is my simple task. The one problem with this was, that it was hard to find a book that would close only when the car hit it and was not so heavy that it did not close. But once I found the perfect book my life was easier.

In the beginning of my machine, a marble came out of a tube, but I found that it was not necessary so I took it out. Another reason I took it out was, it was hard to get it to work every time. In other words, it was not reliable. I thought that making little tweaks to the machine was necessary because I had to figure out what worked best. I decided to use dominos. My dog is trained to go to the bathroom outside or on a pad. When I was building, she pooped right near the dominos. I was cleaning it up when my arm hit one of the dominoes and they all came crashing down! I was so annoyed.

I thought making the WeVideo was the easiest part. All I had to do was upload the videos to Drive from my phone’s camera roll. Then I could just upload them out of Drive and put them in my video, and then add in all the features such as text and music. I had my older brother help me a little bit with the things I could not get right since he has already done this project once before.

Overall, I thought that this project was a great experience, and I hope to do something like it again soon.

Rube Goldberg Post #1

My class and I did a project called Rube Goldberg. A Rube Goldberg is a chain reaction that leads to doing a simple task. My simple task was closing the cover of a book. It was very stressful testin because things kept falling apart. and I had to take lots of breaks. But at the end of 24 exasperating tests, I completed my goal.

I think that learning about simple machines was very helpful. After I knew about simple machines, I could do a lot more specific details in my Rube Goldberg. For example, I had a better understanding of how I could use a pulley to close my book cover.

In the beginning, I had all these ideas. But when I put them together nothing made sense. Like, I had no way to connect the books to the marble run. I think The materials that worked the best for me, were the marble run and dominos because they were reliable and I knew really well how to use them. My teacher asked us to draw a sketch of what we thought our project would look like. In the beginning, I used a tube with a marble to hit dominoes but realized I did not need it, because the tube could just have the tube nock into the tile.

Overall, this process was fun but stressful. I loved learning about simple machines and being able to become a real engineer.

 

Feature Article Reflection

I had a lot of trouble picking my topic for my feature article. At first, I was going to do my favorite ski mountain. But I thought that I did not have enough things to teach about it. I wrote Epcot on my list but I didn’t think too much of it and brainstormed more ideas. When I could not think of any more I just chose Epcot, and to be completely honest, I chose it because it was easy. My message came to me as soon as I had chosen Epcot as my topic. Why Epcot is forgotten. But when I was talking with my teacher, she told me it need a little more meaning. So together we came up with a new message, Epcot is overlooked. I thought that this was perfect! It said exactly what I was trying to say.

I think that I tried making things sound not so adult-like. I did not want it to sound like I had my older brother write it for me! So whenever I needed to look something up I got the information I wrote it down in my own words, but sometimes that was hard. I had to make sure that everything went together and sounded good.

The hard part about writing my feature article was that I always needed to know if everything was true. The truth was my biggest enemy. I think that I was always worried that I was not going to make the due date. On independent days I was always at band when my class was doing the writing, so I had to catch up. I would go home and keep writing, a lot. I liked writing, but I have never worked so hard to make my writing good. I liked to research, I like to take notes and soak up all of the information.  Found the formatting hard. I am not the biggest tech person. I did not like how I had to drag everything at its pace, it hurt my hand.

I am most proud of the way it all turned out. It was a very long process and I am happy that it is all done. I think that I enjoyed the moment, but got a little bored of it in the end. I wanted it to be over now that it is I am very proud of my work.

I liked writing my Narrative a little better than my feature article. I thought that writing my feature article was harder because I had to make sure that everything was true. In my narrative, I could just write down what I remembered. Maybe it was that it took longer to write the feature article than it did to write the narrative. I know that this is not going to be the last writing project, so I am excited for what is to come.

 

My Reading Life Timeline

I loved this project. It took a lot of time. First I filled out the timeline planner and added pictures to it. Next, I wrote my summaries and edited them. After that, I made the covers of my little booklets by printing out the covers, gluing them to the front of the paper cards. Then I decorated the front and glued the summaries to the inside of the cards. Lastly, I added some final details and pasted everything to the long piece of paper.

 

I liked the part where we put everything together. The end product was very satisfying. I did not like the part where I had to make summaries. I found that it was hard to remember so much.

 

I think that I saw that I like fiction and that type of book is the book that has stuck with me for all this time.

 

The book Oh the Places You’ll Go stands out to me. It stands out to me because I have kept it with me for almost my whole life.

Choosing a Topic for my Feature Article

Our class is starting a nonfiction writing unit. I think that I am going to do Epcot. But I am not sure. I started to think that I wanted to do hanukkah. I think that I could do both because I know a lot about them both. My partner did not give any feedback. I kind of get it though, I know it can be hard to give feedback right on the spot. I am leaning towards doing Epcot. I love Epcot and think that it will be a great thing to do my article on. But I still don’t know.

 

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