This is my small moment narrative. I wrote this story because I love trains. This was the first time I went on a train with my grandma. I learned how to use paragraphs. which was very important. I also learned good leads and good endings. I also learned when to start a new paragraph. Have fun reading!
Hi!I liked your internal thinking such as, How does the train work?Why do they put stuff in the engine? Great that you didn’t get carried away with ballet and I won’t have to read that. 🙂 You really told the story bit by bit.