Feature Article Reflection

Have you ever written a feature article or even know what it is? Writing one was challenging but also very enjoyable. You have to chose a topic, a main idea or message, and a format. I chose to write about the The Men’s Federation Internationale de Football Association (FIFA) World Cup. There are many reasons why I chose this topic. At the end there were also many things I was proud of and some techniques that I used were more effective than others. It all took a lot of thought but it came out fine. 

The reason I chose to write about The Men’s FIFA World Cup is because I knew a lot about the World Cup and I always had had a love and passion for soccer. I wanted to show exactly how much the players and teams had to go through to claim the worlds greatest trophy so I chose the message “The FIFA Men’s World Cup is really hard to win.” I needed to prove how it was more hard to win than the tennis tournaments or the Olympics. 

The parts of writing the article that were most challenging to write about was the category of The World Cup Qualifiers. I did not know that much of the Qualifiers and had to do a lot of research. Another part that was most challenging was writing something in your own words. Its so easy to just do command c, command v. The problem is that is stealing. Another challenge was the actual part were I had to organize the writhing into a slideshow and find images. There was so many “you have to put it like this” and “you can’t do this” restrictions. Also there was restrictions like all the sizes had to be correct, that you could only have one font, and the line and paragraph spacing needed to be 1.15, forced to the top, and aligned to the left. There were also so many grammar checks that we had to do and looking over a 1,000 word block of writing is a pain. This was also enjoyable because it was fun to play around with the organization. The writing part was also pretty enjoyable because I like it to just be silence and have your fingers flying on the keyboard. It was also really fun to add pictures and have fun fact boxes. Even I learned a little by searching for fun facts. But writing a feature article is different from writing a personal narrative or a all about expert book. That because you have to focus on a single message and you have to do a lot of formatting because it is a article. Not a book. 

There were many techniques that I used when I was writing and formatting my feature article like pictures that explained the text, on the bottom and top of the pages I put red strips to make the article look better, and I used a fun fact box and a glossary. Some things I’m really proud of in my feature article are like learning new things myself and completing the narrative. But the thing I am most proud of is finishing the formatting. It was really fun and hard to organize the formatting. In the beginning the slides just looked pretty bad and messy. But after I finished I was really proud that I had persevered. 

So that is why I chose to write about The Men’s Federation Internationale de Football Association (FIFA) World Cup, the most challenging and enjoyable parts, the most effective techniques, and the things I am most proud of when I finished.

If you want to read my feature article here it is:

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My American Revolution topic was Why did the Colonists win the Revolutionary War? I picked it because I knew that the British military was the strongest in the world at the time so how did the colonists win? I am sharing my topic through a TED talk. The thing that I needed most help with was finding research on what strategies did the continental army use to defeat the British army and what other things helped them. Did they have allies? Was the land in their favor? Did they seek out huge battles and hope they win? The best part about the project was when I was almost done. After all the hard work I was almost done. The project showed me how you can’t just trust one website or think that the internet is always right – anybody could post false information on the internet. You can’t trust only one website even if it is a website like Wikipedia. I’m excited to present but also a little nervous. What if I mess up? Practicing has helped me grow more confident in myself. I need to remember to switch the slides though! 

Extreme Weather Reflections

When choosing groups I was very happy with the people on it. I got my first choice and had most of my friends in the group. I chose hurricanes because I had already studied them but was very curious about how they were measured. That is why I changed with Max. Firstly, because Max was unhappy about what he was studying and I liked data gathering. I debated on tsunamis but decided on hurricanes. I kind of wished I chose tsunamis but I am still really happy with hurricanes.

When finding information on hurricanes about how they were measured I think I was pretty successful because I had no trouble on finding websites. They had many pages on dropsondes and satellites which they said were the most important in tracking hurricanes. I think I had more success on websites than books because all the books were a bit out-dated. The websites also explained every single detail better than the books.

I was able to make notes that I then used later because there were two great websites, the NATIONAL CENTER FOR ATMOSPHERIC RESEARCH and the HURRICANES articles which had rich information on dropsondes and satellites. 

My group helped me find the NATIONAL CENTER FOR ATMOSPHERIC RESEARCH article and Ben found me a great book on satellites. I also supported my group members by finding one website on hurricane Sandy for Ella. I also found the path of hurricane info and the cost of rebuilding from a hurricane for Max which they both used in their script. 

I struggled a bit to turn the writing into a script because I didn’t know what to get rid of. If it hadn’t been for Ben and Jacob I probably would not have been able to say the entire script in 30 seconds. Still I was happy with the script. My mom helped me because she said I had to introduce the things I was going to talk about. I ignored it but later realized she was right.  I changed it 2 days after the presentation and she said it was a lot better. 

When finding images I had a little trouble but I kept switching them. Finally, I settled after 13 changed photos on the second slide, a picture of satellites over a hurricane and a computer viewing a hurricane. Then after one change of photos on the first I settled with a dropsonde about to be dropped.

When memorizing my script I thought it would be hard but turned out to be easy. After a few tries I could say it perfectly. The little changes I made were easy to add and remember. But the thing was when everybody was there I was a little nervous. I’m okay with them looking at me but if they were staring I got so nervous I would forget my lines. 

The best part of working with a group is that they help you. They notice mistakes and without my group my script would have been too long. Working with a group also means you have company. You can talk to them and ask them questions.

The hardest part of working with a group is that you get into arguments, especially when you’re choosing things. Also sometimes when somebody helps you and you disagree the other person has to understand that it is the other person’s choice. 

The thing that I am most proud of is doing the presentation. I had to plow through and get over my nervousness to speak in front of the parents. I was very scared but I still did it. 

My Expert Book: China

I came up with the idea of writing about China because I am Chinese American, I also wrote about China because there’s a lot of information so my book would long even if I only wrote about a few things. It took 3 and a half mouths to complete the whole book, first we brainstormed ideas and chose one of them, then I had to do a brain – dump, a brain – dump is where you write down everything you know about the topic you picked. Then we organized the brain – dump because if I had not the book would be sloppy. After that I wrote 3 idea books with 3 chapters each and chose one of the books. I chose the book that talked about Qin Shihuag, the Great Wall of China, Beijing, Hong Kong, The Forbidden City, Chinese New year, silk, and food. Then I wrote everything down on paper. Next I typed all the things we wrote on paper and made many edits, then in computer lad I learned how to add photos and make them look good and add links. Finally we read through everything, made a dedication page, made the tiniest edits, and did everything to get ready to publish it. After I finished everything I started writing this reflection.  My favorite part was when I typed everything because I like to move my fingers. I felt good and sad at the end, good because I was finally done and really proud of myself, sad because I really liked writing and typing the book. 

This is my expert book.

 

 

Thank you for reading.