Persuasive Writing Process

Aside

My Reflection on the process:

When I made my slideshow about how people should stop smoking, it was really easy for me even though it took more than two months. My slideshow had to be about something I was passionate about, so I chose my topic to be to stop smoking. I decided to write down all the facts I knew about smoking to help me with this project. Making a slideshow about smoking was very easy for me because since smoking is so popular, it makes it easy to gather information. Doing this project was not hard for me. It was actually very fun and exciting for me. When I reviewed my slideshow, I was proud of my work. Some of the pictures were hard to find, but if I couldn’t find any pictures, I just added words to match my speaking. For some of the pictures I couldn’t add, it was also hard to find pictures to match my speaking. I had a template to write the information about smoking stuff that I knew. Then I combined it in my slideshow and the results were amazing. Even though doing this wasn’t hard, making this was still hard work for me. I enjoyed doing this very much!

My Essay on Smoking:

Why We should Stop Smoking

Did you know that smoking one cigarette can take 11 minutes off of your life?  I know you might think ‘Smoking isn’t that bad’ but it is way worse than you think.

I know I am just a kid, but I firmly believe smoking hurts both people that smoke and people that don’t. For example, people who smoke (consumers) don’t know that the harmful air they make by smoking goes into nonsmokers’ bodies which causes them to get really sick. I remember walking around New York City and seeing a lot of people smoking near non-smokers. The nonsmokers started coughing and waving their hands in their face. The nonsmokers were quickly walking away. Also, I saw a lot of people who were coughing and sneezing because of other people smoking. This proves that seeing people smoke is common and many people have seen other people smoke. Another example is that consumers didn’t get an education, so they don’t know how harmful it is for nonsmokers and themselves. Not getting an education is also bad for nonsmokers because they can walk past a consumer many times without knowing what will happen to them.

Second of all, cigarettes are deadly. One example of why is because if you smoke for at least five months the air in your lungs could get contaminated and you could get sick and it could lead to lung cancer. Another example is that it weakens the ozone layer and the ozone layer protects us from global warming. People could die because global warming is bad for us. Also, cigarettes have a toxic mix of over 7,000 chemicals, including more than 70 that can cause cancer. Lastly, because smoking is addictive, once you start smoking you can’t stop smoking. It’s like candy for children. If children eat too much candy they will get sick and they will get a lot of cavities. For smoking, it’s bad if you do it because you’ll get sick but even worse than candy, you’ll die with too much. It’s better for children though because they are aware that it’s bad for you and children don’t feel good after eating too much so they stop so smoking is way worse. My last example for all of this is that people who are consumers forget about how dangerous it is to smoke because smoking is addictive for people so they continue.

Click below to see my video about Smoking:

https://youtu.be/W5ohDVJcXlM

Infographic on Burundi

I chose to study Burundi because it’s a poor country with not a lot of resources. Burundi had a lot of information I could use. It may have been a random choice, but I wanted to do something that no one else would even think of doing because I wanted my infographic to be extraordinary. Burundi is way more poor than you might think. I know I don’t have exactly a good reason why I chose Burundi for this, but it still was really fun. It may look like it was really easy to make this, but it was way harder than you think! I started this off with a bunch of words, but then I realized an infographic is where you have to explain about your country in mostly words! When I realized that, doing this seemed a lot easier. I had to do a lot of research to do this project even though it may not seem like that. I had to delete most of the words from my infographic because it has to, of course, be made up of mostly words. Doing this was challenging, but I soon got the hang of it.  I had to work on this project for a really long time but it was totally worth it! What I liked about doing this was that it was fun, but still challenging. Doing this was an amazing experience and I put my heart into making this!

My Expert Book: Going to the Zoo

I wrote this book because it was really fun to write and it was also fun for me in real life! Thinking of what to write was really hard and it was almost impossible for me to think of anything. My favorite part of making the book was adding the cover and adding the pictures on the slideshow because looking for them was fun. I enjoyed it so much. When I was looking for a picture, I noticed one that looked really cool! When I pressed the slideshow, it looked so much cooler and I loved it. I learned lots of facts while making the book which was really fun for me! I had to hurry on finishing the paper book about it because my teacher said that. All I had to do was staple the paper and add the cover until I would be finished. I finally finished my paper book when I had to do another project but that isn’t what I’m talking about! I felt really great when I finished my book because no one would tell me “ Hurry up!” anymore! I was also really happy when I finished because it was exhausting and stressful. I loved my cover of the paper book because it looked so cool and totally awesome! I was happy to make it and making the slideshow was also fun. I did the slideshow part in tech and then wrote the book in my class which I think was easier.

This is my expert book.


Thank you for reading!

Personal Narrative Reflection

I enjoyed writing personal narrative stories because it was improving my typing skills! It was challenging for me because sometimes I had no idea of what to write about. I chose my story because the story I wrote about was a fun thing that happened to me and I couldn’t think of anything else to write about.

Writing the heart of the story was really easy. Because all I had to do was find the main part of my story and the main part of the story was basically on the cover!

I thought the revision process was amazing because I felt like it was so easy to just rewrite from my draft!

Typing is fun and really exciting for me because I like improving my typing skills and I like challenges.

The Statue Of Liberty

“Dad is so slow!” I heard my older brother say.I estimated that dad was five feet

Behind us as we were running and were afraid that we would be late. And we were also so sweaty that we were boiling our skin off and I was definitely going to be happy when we were going to be in the boat where the sun would be off are tracks.

When we finally got to the boat I was jumping with joy! It wasn’t even a little bit hot! There were also two floors on the boat! It was kinda hard to go to the  second floor because the boat was moving so we had to hold on to the rails.At the top there was a snack bar! I was so hungry too!             

We could hear the splashing of the sea as the boat went through the water below us.The type of boat could probably be a yacht because it looked so modern! We finally saw The Statue of Liberty! It was so cool but we didn’t really get to go inside it. But it was still fun!

It was really big from up close and lots of people were pounding out of the boat but some people like us stayed on the boat and we didn’t go on Ellis Island[ by the way Ellis island is the island where the Statue Of Liberty is.]  I wondered a lot of questions on the way back home.     On the the way back home we saw jetski people and we waved our hands the signal of hi and the jetski people waved back and it was really fun until we had to get off the boat. I complained to my parents

”I don’t want to leave!” but they said

 “We have to give other people a chance!” and I  asked my mom and dad “Can we at least go to jetski here one day!?” and they exclaimed 

“yes.” and I happily went off the boat but as we got off the boat we saw a huge surprise!   We saw cone’s and lots of people were surrounding and then we saw someone going in the cone’s and then they said in a microphone ‘

“Why are you so far away from the cone’s!? Come closer!” And then they picked some volunteers and guess what!? My BROTHER was a volunteer! I was so happy for him! And some hooligan people were the host who backflipped surprisingly over my brother! And at at the end we got ice cream BUT I saw another ice cream truck that sold that looked so much more delicious and tempting and looked way better then the other ice cream that I just ate :[  and I just did a sad emoji because my mom said that I couldn’t get another ice cream but my dad said I could and when my mom said I couldn’t my dad automatically listen to my mom. But my dad explained

 “Maybe we can come here again to get ice cream.” and of course after school started we actually could go because there are tickets there and the ride is like two hours.That day was probably the BEST DAY EVER!!! And it was a day I will never forget. Now I’m going to relax my hands. Wait, no, never mind.The end!!