What I am most proud of is writing dialogue because I want the reader to think of it as real life happening. I really loved the start of my story. It starts like this Bring, bring, bring. I also loved how I ended it, Luciano always says yes. I loved how I added dialogue to me and my mom. 

The one thing that was difficult was adding details because you have to read it over again to make sure the spelling is correct. I used to not like how I used too much dialogue but I added more details.I used to not like how I read my writing in my head, now I whisper it.