I came up with West Palm Beach because I knew it was a great idea to write about it. What I enjoyed from writing was how I was coming up with food, food is great! What I didn’t like writing about West Palm Beach was doing the conclusion, I always have trouble writing about it. I thought about the video being amazing. I want people to go to West Palm Beach and eat, get houses and go to the amazing beaches.
My favorite part was talking to my partner because I get to share what i said in my jot and we would write each other a little note like good job or nice work.The most challenging part about being in a book club partnership was when we get goofy we don’t do our jot and we don’t know what we are doing tonight. My favorite book was Keena Ford and the journal mix-up because it was interesting how Keena lost her journal and figured out that Tiffany lied to Keena. For my jots,I can work on a web and because I don’t use that type of jot and I think I should get better at it.The character I connected with was Lola from Lola Levien Is Not Mean because we both don’t like someone bullying someone. I think the most important part of working with a partner is you should pay attention to the other person speaking and don’t talk over someone when they are talking. I learned that don’t hurt someone’s feelings when they are talking. They might be like blah blah blah and that could hurt someone like me and you should listen to the other person.
With my ideas of Maltese Dogs I thought about my brother writing his Maltese dog book. I asked him if he would help me and he helped me pick a topic and he said Maltese dogs!When I wanted to do Maltese dogs I had to write on paper! It was difficult on paper but on computers it’s easier! The most difficult part was writing and planning,I had to choose the sub headings and lots of other stuff! I needed a lot of help on spelling because you can’t know how to spell every single word! My favorite of my Maltese dog book was finding the cover. It was really fun! I learned a lot from my book because I had to search up what Maltese dogs can’t have and it said chocolate and a lot of others! I learned from making my book was to helping others and don’t give up if you make a mistake. Try harder! After I made Maltese dogs I felt really happy!
This is my expert book.
Thank you for reading!
We had the track covered with 4 strip magnets. The car had 4 disk magnets on the bottom of the car. The original plan did not work because it did not balance evenly and didn’t cover the magnet to repel. We took away the two middle strips of magnets on the track. We also took the disk magnets away on the bottom of the train and added thee two magnets to the side
We added 2 strip magnets each side to the track to make the train higher and carry more people. It was successful because balanced better with the 4 strip magnets I Learned it takes teamwork while your doing your train. I did like designing because It was interesting how it was floating. It was hard to improve because we messed up 2 times! My favorite part was taping the magnets to the train track and making the car. I learned that we used different stages to figure out what will work. I enjoyed being with my group because they took turns. One part was challenging, the train to balance.
What I am most proud of is writing dialogue because I want the reader to think of it as real life happening. I really loved the start of my story. It starts like this Bring, bring, bring. I also loved how I ended it, Luciano always says yes. I loved how I added dialogue to me and my mom.
The one thing that was difficult was adding details because you have to read it over again to make sure the spelling is correct. I used to not like how I used too much dialogue but I added more details.I used to not like how I read my writing in my head, now I whisper it.
Bring, bring, bring. My alarm clock was beeping.
I got up and stopped it and walked to the kitchen,
I groaned “I am hungry.”
Maryna asked me “Then what do you want for breakfast?
I responded “What can I have?” She gave me options of what I could eat.
“I want waffles please!” I told her. Maryna packed me my lunch and snack as she was making my breakfast.
Then, I went upstairs and I saw my mom! I hadn’t seen her often in mornings
“Hi sweetie. How are you? I am getting ready for work!” my mom said
I hugged my mom tight. My mom hugged me tight back also.
My mom asked me “Have you brushed your teeth?” I need to go to work!’
I answered her “Yes I am going to brush my teeth but don’t be late for work!”
“Okay,” my mom said and my mom left.
I brushed my teeth with a flavor that tasted like mint but it had no mint flavor.
After I brushed my teeth, I went to change. I thought what should I wear today?
I yelled “MARYNA! what should I wear?”
Maryna yelled back “I am coming to help!” Maryna came 5 minutes later.
“Wear jeans, a sweater and short sleeves underneath the sweater.” Maryna said
I did what she told me and put on socks.
Then I went to the kitchen so I could wait for the bus. While I was waiting I put on my shoes.
The bus came! It was honking crazy! I got on the bus and talked about what happened this morning because I was on my bus.
I always tell him before I tell him what happened this crazy morning. I say “How was your day yesterday?” Luciano always says good.
I just laughed after he says good.
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