Good job, I really liked the pictures that you chose. The music matches with you’re voice. It had a lot of information in. I enjoyed the entertament.
I like how you used “and”to fill in the gap were you did not talk.
Great! I like how you used detail.
Good job, I really liked the pictures that you chose. The music matches with you’re voice. It had a lot of information in. I enjoyed the entertament.
great use of words 👍
from Hayden