This is my small moment narrative.I chose to write about skiing because I love to ski. One of my lessons was to write stories and pick a seed we would like to draft. Another lesson was to write your story in a storytellers voice and not a reporters voice. Dialogue is a very important part of a story. If you have dialogue it will be fun to read your book to learn about your characters. Paragraphs are very important too, if you don’t use them it will be very confusing to read. Those were some of the lessons I learned. Read my story. I think you will like it a lot.
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Wow! Blake you are very brave. I know how much you love to ski with your family. I can’t wait to hear about your weekend trips this year. I wish I started to ski when I was a kid, maybe I wouldn’t be as scared now. I never tried a black diamond before. I love your storytellers voice in your small moment. Congratulations on all your hard work!
I like how you use action words in your lead.