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I learned so much in our mystery unit. One of the things that I learned was you want to try to solve the mystery before the crime solvers do. One other thing I learned was to stop and jot when you find a new suspect or clue. The last thing I learned that I am going to tell you is that if you are reading a mystery book use a time line so you can remember what happened in the chapter. I hope you enjoy my story.

The Empty Envelope

Josh, Dink and Ruth Rose got an empty envelope to their house which is Green lawn Connecticut. They saw an address on it and a phone number so they  called the number. The person wanted the envelope so she came right over but they pretended they couldn’t find it. Then they went to the library to find out why she wanted it so bad.  They found out that the stamp on it is worth 50,000 dollars. At that time they realized that she does not really own that stamp. So they Called the policeman and said I need to capture someone that stool a very special stamp. The police  said they would help them. Then they said to the criminal, “come over and I will give you the stamp”. So she came over and When the police jumped out and captured the thief so they put her in the cell. Josh, Roth Rose and Dink walked home. 

 

Small moment

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This is my small moment narrative.I chose to write about skiing because I love to ski.  One of my lessons was to write stories and pick a seed we would like to draft. Another lesson was to write your story in a storytellers voice and not a reporters voice. Dialogue is a very important part of a story. If you have dialogue it will be fun to read your book to learn about your characters. Paragraphs are very important too, if you don’t use them it will be very confusing to read. Those were some of the lessons I learned. Read my story. I think you will like it a lot.

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