I had a lot of fun working on my personal narrative. Today I am going to talk about some strategies, some things that I want to improve, and something that I am most proud of. I hope you enjoy it!
One strategy/technique that I used is to re-read my narrative to see if it sounds right. This helps me because If there are any mistakes like grammar or spelling mistakes, then I will see them. Also, I can see if I need to add something like details. One example is, in the beginning, I wrote, “ My dad replies, as he stuffs one into the now cramped trunk.” that did not make sense so I rewrote it and now it is like this, “My dad replies, as he stuffs a big white suitcase into the now cramped trunk.”
One thing that I want to still improve is to make my dad more in the story. I tried doing that a little but my mom still has a lot more parts than him.
One thing that I am most proud of in this piece is the description and the detail. I added a lot more detail in this piece than in any other piece. I think I improved as a writer. I am really proud of my work and I hope you like it too.