My persuasive speech was about animals and their habitats. Throughout the unit, I learned how to organize my text, to talk to the audience, and to have evidence that makes sense and how to have a strong thesis statement.

I think that the most effective ways that I learned to convince and persuade the audience throughout the unit was to talk to the audience, like “You might ask….” Also, to write a good persuasive speech you need to have a lot of evidence to support  a strong thesis statement.

I think that I should have looked up at the camera more, exaggerated my feelings, (of course you might get a little stage fright at first,) and I think that I could have talked louder with making it clear to the audience when I was talking.

Honestly I don’t know what I could have done better in my speech. Maybe I have to ask others but maybe, it’s good how it is. 

https://youtu.be/6DLblkFk7Go