Persuasive – stop cutting down trees – Daniel

I made a project that took very long and it was very hard, but I am finally done. I learned many things. Like at the beginning I would use a lead, and try to persuade you. My teacher (Ms. Degrazia) taught me how to how to do a claim and examples. And if you cut down trees than you can maybe stop. So I hope you get persuaded.

 

 

Small Moments Narrative

This is my small moments narrative. I have learned many things to make my writing better. Like making a better lead. Also, I have learn when to start a new paragraph and to add quotation marks too. I love to go to the pool but it was one of the scariest things that happened to me. I learned all this stuff at Heathcote. It took very long to make this story. I worked very hard, so hope you enjoy the story!