November
1
Ryder is a Girl
This is my small moment narrative.We have worked on a small things of something that happened in our life. And this is what I learned how to use paragraphs, quotes, and leads. I hope enjoy my story.
I really liked your thinking about the topic. Ryders a girl. I love it. Make-up and everything, love it.
That was super funny I once dressed up my brother too. I could not believe Ryder thought he was a girl, I loved it.
Emme, all I got to say is… That was such a funny story because you made Ryder look like a girl! I could tell that you really worked hard on your story! I loved how you used so much good action words.
Reading your story made me laugh. Your story had so much parts where I just cracked up. It was a really good, funny, and story.