Persuasive Writing Process

My Reflection on the Process:

I chose to write about and study electronics and the effect of screen time on kids. It was important to me because in the future we would not want this to happen to anyone because we can stop. Something that was hard for me was the video recording:

1: you had to make sure there was no background noise  

2: You had to put it in a short period of time

3: you had to make your videos 

My first topic was saving electricity but, I realized that I was going to electronics and why kids spend to much time on them.I also new a lot about this topic. Something I liked was adding photos. I got to chose what looked good. I also leaned from the photos. I felt good with the finale product. Hope you enjoyed it as much as I did.

 

My Essay on Electronics

My opinion is that too many kids spend too much time on screens. Too much time on screens causes many horrible things.One reason it’s bad  is because children are so busy spending time on their electronics, they don’t have time to do anything else. For example, kids aren’t reading. There’s a ‘read to me option’ on electronics. In kindergarten I hated reading so I would always use the read to me option. This didn’t help me become a stronger reader. Another example is kids aren’t spending time with their family during meals. It’s bad because this is the time when kids can talk to their parents because they are working. My teacher told me that they ate every single meal at the table with no electronics.  Lastly, kids aren’t learning family traditions.  Sure they could learn about it online, but it won’t be a special family tradition. They won’t be a part of making,keeping the tradition. Screen time is extremely bad for kids, especially young ones.

 

Another reason is that too much screen time could cause health issues, especially for kids who might have weak immune systems. Believe me, most kids are ecstatic about screen time. However, staring at the screen stresses out the brain and causes headaches. Also maybe you are wondering why so many people are wearing blue lite glasses? Well it’s because kids’ eyes are getting strained from staring at electronic screens. Let me tell you one last thing. You kids might think sitting on the couch is comfortable and all, but you might be gaining too much weight. Being overweight is not healthy. Screen time should be a privilege.If you have too much it could be  bad.

 

Another reason too much screen time is bad is because kids aren’t going outside enough. You may be thinking there’s nothing outside but there is plenty. Believe me kids aren’t going outside and making friends and connecting with people. If you make a friend you can play with them. You may be thinking, what’s better than electronics? Something we should all desire is nature. Nature gives you fresh air and it’s healthy and calming. Lastly, not getting enough exercise is bad. Kids need exercise because it’s good for the brain and body.

 

My Video

 

Infographic on Serbia

I choose to study Serbia because my grandparents used to live there. I also wanted to compare it then and now. I know some parts were poor and some were rich. My favorite part about doing it was adding pictures. Finding images that supported my words was pretty easy.I learned that a infographic is something that’s easy to read and has amazing information. It was hard to know what to add in and what was not important. There were a lot of steps. It was harder than I expected. I felt good about it. I wanted to fill up every little space but I figured I didn’t need it. Hope you learned some interesting facts.

Personal Narrative Reflection

Writing Personal Narratives was pretty fun because writing is my favorite subject. But, it was also hard because it was hard to put in more details and actions and thoughts. I was also stressed about it because I didn’t want to fall behind. 

I chose to write this story because my teacher, Ms. Rinaldi complimented me on my small moment. When she did that it made me feel like my work had finally paid off. When she said that I know my work is really marvelous.

It was pretty easy to write the heart of my story because I already experienced that part of the story in real life. So all I had to do is go back to that moment and just add some more details.

I found the revision process challenging because I had to change things that I liked in my original story. But I also found it fun because my story sounded better and better as I was going.

Typing was the worst part of the process for me because at that point, I was still learning how to not look down at the keyboard. But it was still good practice.

Personal Narrative

The door slammed, BANG! I had just come home from soccer practice. I felt like droopy pasta. I also felt exhausted. Then I remembered my 100 pound book bag. I slowly opened my backpack.  ZIP! l felt nervous and my heart was pounding. AGH!  l gasped. I was shocked when I saw how much homework I had. I started to bite my fingers. There were books everywhere. “OMG!”, I shouted. I didn’t even eat dinner and I had so much homework. I exaggerated. I’m never going to get this accomplished in time. I thought with a fixed mindset.  

“My bedtime is in 2 hours!!”, I exaggerated. “What am I supposed to do now?” I don’t want to show a bad expression of myself, because it’s only the first week of school.” I  started to get watery eyes. Then I started to cry. I didn’t want anyone to hear me. So I whimpered quietly.  I sounded like a dog whimpering for food. I tried to change my voice but I couldn’t help myself.

 

I put on my fierce face and wiped off my tears.  “I can do this. I am a smart, intelligent kid. I can do anything if I put my mind to it.  I AM A MARMANN!”  Then I threw my hands up in the air.  Then I marched up to my room. When I tried to stay calm and do my homework, my mind was racing with so many thoughts. I would rather be hurt than do homework. I listened to everything the teachers said about the homework. What’s wrong with me! I had knots in my stomach. I felt sick. I wanted to make an excuse for not doing my homework but that would not be good because what comes around goes around.  If I do it I will regret it so I’M NOT DOING IT NO MATTER WHAT. 

 

I knew I needed a plan.  I sat down at my desk.  How am I supposed to accomplish this? Ah Ha! I suddenly realized that I was just a kid and someone had to be home with me. Someone has to be home to help me with homework.  I went downstairs to find my dad on the couch.  I came a little closer to see what he was doing. To my surprise he was on the phone. I waited ten minutes. In those ten minutes I decided to get a snack. But he was still on the phone.  What could he possibly be talking about for so long? I wanted my dad to be done. I was about to burst out with words. I guess my best bet was to do it on my own.  My brain was telling me to wait because I already tried. I guess I’ll give myself a second chance but before I go upstairs I want to see if my dad is off the phone but he wasn’t so I went up stairs.

 

AHA I know what to do. I can facetime my mom at work but maybe I shouldn’t. She’s probably on a call or in a meeting. OH I can think about what my mom WOULD say to me. For six minutes my brain was thinking about math. I was about to give up. My brain suddenly rushed to write in one second. The teachers gave us some examples. This would be an excellent starter for my small moment story. I can add so many details, I am for sure going to be one of the best writers in our class. Everyone is going to applaud for me.

“I WILL be famous someday!”, I exclaimed. 

“Am I dreaming?” 

“Somebody pinch me!”, I yelled. Ok, no one pinched me, I’m definitely dreaming! If I want to be famous, I need to start writing now. I should not be screaming so loud, or else I will interrupt my dad. SHHH! 

 

I hope writing isn’t as hard as I think. Ms. Rinaldi used “One day” so I think that will be a good start to my story. Writing is actually a lot of fun, it has become my favorite subject in school. I wish I could write a story every day. I hope we will get a Warm and Fuzzy if everyone does well in writing. I have to just finish up one sentence. I was wondering if I should add a conclusion? So I did, because I thought that would be something an adult would do. Then my dad called, “Dinner!” Phew, I was done before dinner. It was a long, long day, but my perseverance got me through it! 

Welcome to my blog

Welcome to my blog!I am so exited to publish my work!

I am excited to publish my work because I can’t wait for you to see what I can do. I want to be Famous for doing this. I hope you like what I write. I was having trouble at first but now I think its fun. but I’m still having trouble typing.  Did you now writings my favorite subject. I don’t know what i’m going to write next but i’m sure you will like it. I hope you like my blog. Bye! JULIANA