One thing I am most proud of in my personal narrative is my heart. I put most of the details in it. One example is there is a lot of dialogue and action showing me and my dad and I going down the waterslide. I think the reader will think they are going down the waterslide with me. 

One thing that was difficult for me was my ending because the end of my heart is like the end of my story so I had to do some action when I was in the pool. For example I said I canenballed into the pool.