What I am most proud of about my narrative is my ending because I was able to add in an equal amount of thought/feeling and dialogue and I left the reader feeling something. For example, when I said “Cookies really do taste better with a little bit of love,” I think it would make the reader say “Aww,” I also really like how I stretched out my beginning and put tons of detail. For example, when I wrote, “I sprinted over to the staircase and looked up, nobody was coming down so I ran over to the fridge and plopped the dough on the table, by the time I did my mom was already halfway down the stairs.”

I thought paragraphing was hard for me because I struggled finding places when it was a change of setting or speaker but I think I have been improving bit by bit. Putting a balanced amount of dialogue and thought/feeling was a bit hard for me because I didn’t know if I should put dialogue in or thought/feeling in some places, but I am definitely improving.