This is my small moment narrative. I have learned to put in paragraphs, the heart of the story, and use a story tellers voice and more. I have been working on this story for a very long time. I have tried to make it the best I can! I chose to write about the high dive because I thought that I can really make a great story out of this one small moment. And I was right! This story also shows my relationship with me and my brother, Jordan. I hope you like my story! Have fun!
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I like your story!Nice descriptive words and choices for your words. I also liked that you described how it was like and I could feel like I was there!Good job!Keep it up 🙂
I loved your story because it reminds me of the time that I went on the high dive but it was at the Scarsdale pool.
I loved your story. I loved that you were trying something new. And that part where you were scared, you just went with it and jumped in. Good job.
That might be the BEST story I read keep working and have fun!
I like how you said what if I belly FLOP!
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I loved in the beginning you told us the setting right away. I remember jumping off the high dive for the first time, great job.
Your story is awesome! Your dialogue is great.