This is my first blog post. in our first writing unit we learned about using dialogue,leads and paragraphs.I wrote this story because it is a special small moment it took us 4-6 weeks to write this story.
The sun was setting at Camp Starlight. Everybody was running back to the bunks
including Kayla and I we were running back from dinner. The grass had so many hills. Suddenly somebody came OUT OF NOWHERE AND BUMPED INTO KAYLA!!!
He ran over her and she tripped and fell to the floor.
“Ow help,” she cried.
“Are you okay?”
I felt so bad I almost cried and I also felt the pain as much as she did, she sat still as I was panicking my heart almost burst.
I ran to ask our counselor Ella, “Can we go to the health center?”
“Kayla tripped,’’I said.
“Sure you can,” Ella said
“Do you remember the way?’’
I said, “Okay then off you go Ella shouted.’’
“Kayla,’’ I said.
Ella said, “yes”.
Ok she said in a sad voice I felt sorry for her.
We walked carefully but not once did we talk. When we finally opened the door the nurse ran right up to us and said, “What’s the problem?
“She tripped!” I cried.
She walked us to the first aid kit and put a bandaid. We walked back but this time was different. This time we were holding hands.