Passed Out

It was a bright sunny afternoon at Disneyland in California. I was with my family. I was having so much fun, but I didn’t know what was coming for me.

My sister Allie said, “Hey Livy do you want to go on a scary roller coaster?”

I noticed the ride Allie was talking about but all I said was… “Yeah sure I’m not a coward, we do need to tell mom though.”

“Ok,” Allie exclaimed.

 I ran to tell my mom, “Hey mom can I go on the Increda coaster?” I questioned.

My mom said, “Yeah sure, why not?”

I complained to my mom, “ Well maybe I might not be tall enough!”

My mom said, “Ok let’s go see.”

While I was walking I thought to myself. Will I be tall enough? Will I wait in this line for nothing? I stepped on the tape measure… I was tall enough! I went to tell Allie and she was so so excited.

We went in the line and luckily we had a lightning lane. After we were about to go on the ride, I got really nervous.

Allie said, “ It’s ok, I’m nervous too.”

“Thanks Allie you’re the best sister,” I announced. 

It was time to go on the ride. I walked through the tunnel.  As I walked I saw photos on the tunnel walls of people who went on the ride. Most of the people in the photos had their eyes shut. I thought to myself, why does everyone have their eyes shut? My heart was racing at the speed of light. 

I put on my seatbelt and Allie held my hand and squeezed it tightly. 

“Well this is it, the ride we’ve been waiting for,” I exclaimed. As I sat in my seat, the coaster thought we were one of the Incredibles.

“Three, two, one!” The speakers announced. When the ride started, we felt like we were one of the actual superheroes. The water rose up from the ground, then the ride took off.

The ride started moving. I wondered to myself, Will this be the end of my life? Mom dad if you hear me, I love you. It was slow but then it got faster and faster and faster. 

Then all of a sudden, it blasted off. “SWOOSH!” Allie squeezed my hand hard.

Then I screamed, “Allie remember me how I was!”

Allie screamed,“Ok.”

There was a loop de loop coming up but I couldn’t see because … I PASSED OUT. My mouth flopped up and down then Allie woke me up.

Then I finally woke up but I woke up at the wrong time. We were upside down. It felt like we were upside down like we were in space and there was no gravity. After the loop de loop. I PASSED OUT AGAIN!

It got faster and faster and we got to a drop. The ride went side to side, up and down, diagonal  to diagonal. Then the ride came to an end. 

I jumped off but I was silent until I said… 

“Can we go please go again?” I asked.

“NO!” Allie protested.

“Please pretty please.” I said.

After I ran to my mom I gave her a huge hug. She hugged me back strongly. Right as her arms wrapped around me I knew I was safe. 

 

 

 

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