Personal Narrative Reflection

I enjoyed the revision process. It was amazing and fun! Typing was something I couldn’t do well YET, but I had grit and pushed through. Now, I can type with both hands! I chose my narrative because it was a fun time in my life and I thought it would make a terrific story. I had a lot of ideas to write about and I remembered a lot of details for narrative stories. I hope we can do personal narratives again! This is now my favorite kind of writing. Writing the heart of my story for a bit I felt like I couldn’t expand it and that my story idea was too short, but finally it came to me and I feel like I wrote a great story. Overall, I had a great experience writing my personal narrative story.

 

Lunch at Capriccio

 

“Are we there yet”, whined my little brother he was getting impatient. I couldn’t wait to see Paras at Capriccio, a restaurant in Croton on the Hudson. It felt like forever until we got there, boy Croton on the Hudson was far!.

We met Paras there. I quickly grabbed a seat next to him and plopped down into it.

“How was your summer?”, questioned Paras’s dad

“Good,”I answered. Paras went to little league over the summer and now he loves baseball. Next we ordered food and pushed two tables together so there would be enough room for my family and Paras’s family. 

There was a pot of flowers buzzing with insects. There were so many I could practically feel the wind of their wings beating. There were many different kinds of bugs there were hornets, wasps and beetles. Their buzzing noise was so loud I’d bet you could hear from the other side of the building. I was starting to wish that we had picked another spot.

Finally the food arrived.I asked Paras about Rey. I met him this summer and we went to summer camp together. Paras and Rey are friends. We ordered pizza, pasta, gnocchi and cheesy garlic bread! Hari and Yush didn’t want tomato pasta so we ordered butter pasta. “I want fries“,said Yush and before anyone could say anything he grabbed a bunch of fries and dumped them on his plate. We all laughed! After we ate lunch in Capriccio in Croton on the Hudson we went to Blue pig, an ice cream place also in Croton on the Hudson it is my favorite ice cream place. We went in separate cars. Paras picked garden mint and I got maple and wet walnuts. Blue pig they always have different flavors depending on what’s fresh and seasonal. It was awesome! It was great having lunch at Croton on the Hudson with Paras and I can’t wait to come again!