Personal Narrative Reflection

I enjoyed writing personal narrative stories because It reminds me of how much work I did and the story reminds me of how much I do and how lucky I am to be in this life and to have such an amazing family.

I chose my story because it reminds me of how much I love sports and really everything about the word FUN. I also love how it includes everyone in my family. Also, it’s long and I love typing a lot.

Writing the heart of the story was easy because I wrote about one of my favorite things to do and I remember every bit about the patriot game every first down every touchdown and more so i didn’t need help.

I thought the revision process was fun but also very challenging because each time I read my story I think and feel I can make it more interesting, add more punctuation and add more detail but besides that the revision process was very fun.

Typing is fun for me because in my opinion typing is a memory game knowing what is where i don’t close my eyes or use multiple fingers but i’m still a really good typer in my opinion.

Personal Narrative

I whispered “goodbye” to Scout, my dog, and my babysitter Jessica, and hopped in the car. The 3 hour car ride has started. The three hour car is so bad that I feel car sick writing this. But I survived. 

 “Guess where we are?” mom said happily.

I looked to my left. A big  stadium with the word Gillette was staring at my eyes…

We were at the patriot stadium.

Tailgate.

 I hopped out of my car and I thought I was going to see a patriot game. This is where I introduce my favorite 2 words, porta and potty. They’re 5 letters each. It’s fun to say and it’s fun to use. And that’s where I went to the bathroom, the porta potty I gotta tell you. Those porta potties were awful. We went to our tailgate spot and of course a game of Rummikub was going on and then we saw a man with a camera a sweater and pants he was tall as he appeared to our sight he told us that he took pictures for newspapers mom told me that grandpa cooked a five star meal with a back injury and its was very nice. We asked him “is it confirmed to go on the newspaper” “there’s a chance” he replied we smiled and the camera clicked  He stated it was a great picture. And it was time to eat,

 I helped myself to some steak “best steak of my life”

It was chewy but that was only a small margin of time and after a long Rummikub game it was time to enter the stadium.

The game

“O say does that star spangle”

Then it was the coin flip the ref asked one of there players heads or tails he replied “tails”

It is heads they asked the patriot player to defer or attack he answered “defer” 

With the kick of the feet to a sprint and black the game started. 1st and 10 at Ba 20 BA there were two straight punts and we went to get food. I got popcorn and a Sierra mist and Blake, my sister got fried dough and popcorn and we got gummies to share.

And before we new it we were losing 7-0 but it’s never over for new England and before we knew it mac jones got us in to field goal range on a 4th and 5 we went for the field goal “lined” “hold” “kick up the middle” “its good”

The stadium was like a bee hive with buzzing bees 

3rd and 7 Ba ball hike Jaxon gets the ball throws it incomplete! Patriot ball at NE 20 4th and 1 at the Ba 30 complete at the 10 D harris run up the middle td patriots we roared as the scoreboard changed from 3-7 to 10-7 we were winning with 3 minutes left in the first half kick sailed caught at the 40 to the 45 50 and down 1st and 10 we were up but with luck on our side this happened 1st and ten “caught td Baltimore” “boo” we roared

Trailing 4 in the first half with no luck we did have De Vante parker and with a screen route being double teamed DeVante parker made a 1 handed grab to a roar of patriot fans with 3 seconds left in the first half the kick sailed and it was good “agh” we screamed “lets go” this time parker ran a different route and was wide open and a TD patriots 20-14 pats  But a quick drive made us trail 21-20 we punted Ba ball in prime field possession  Jaxon’s pass to Andrews its intercepted “yes” I screamed 

Ne ball at the 30 mac jones pass to the end zone high and  caught “Yes” we yelled everything was going great 26-21 as we went for a two point conversion no good 26-21 still Baltimore scored a TD 27-26 them new England pass up the middle caught fumble “####” I yelled “####” and of course a field goal 30-26 Baltimore 3rd and a long 8 “incomplete” yelled the commentator in a horrible accent 

A touchdown scored for Baltimore my teeth were clinching, it’s never over i said to my self and with 4 seconds left in the game this happened “ready hike” mac jones slight throw bobbled in the air “intercepted” and mac jones is jumping on one leg…