I am very proud of my capitals  punctuation and my paragraphs.

I could have used more dialog and describing words and I could have expanded my heart of my story more.

My favorite part of writing my narrative was paragraphs and getting to do a lot of writing.

My least favorite part of writing my narrative was dialog and doing really hard work.

I also could have used a better lead and a better balance of my story.

and I really liked leaving the end and the reader feeling something and writing a small story.