Personal Narrative Reflection

I am very proud of my capitals  punctuation and my paragraphs.

I could have used more dialog and describing words and I could have expanded my heart of my story more.

My favorite part of writing my narrative was paragraphs and getting to do a lot of writing.

My least favorite part of writing my narrative was dialog and doing really hard work.

I also could have used a better lead and a better balance of my story.

and I really liked leaving the end and the reader feeling something and writing a small story.

THE JET SKI

 

I went on a jet ski for the first time ever. At first I was really scared.

I told my grandpa to start off slow and then go faster and faster, until I told my grandpa to stay at the same speed.

The waves were swooshing, and the jet ski motor was very loud. Everything on the jet ski was working. We went so fast that the water from the back hole on the jet ski started spraying water very high. We went on very high waves and we were going very fast at the same time. My grandpa was having a good time. My grandpa was smiling.

I thought that the jet ski was very exciting. But when we got off the jet ski I was very sad because the jet ski was very fun.

At dinner time, I told my family about the jet ski. My family was very happy for me.

 During dinner time I thought to myself that it was the best day ever.

 I asked my parents if I could go on the jet ski tomorrow. My parents thought about it and said “Yes.”

 

“I can not wait for tomorrow!” “Yay!” I screamed

 

I ran around my Connecticut house very fast.

“Do not be too fast or you will hurt yourself.”  screamed my parents from down stairs. 

I was so excited that I could go on the jet ski tomorrow!